剧情描述：As the title suggests, this video is only PRACTICE. I am fully aware it has problems. The purpose of making this video is for me to learn what works and what doesn039;t - the purpose of POSTING this video is to get feedback on things that are not obvious errors, like the shoulders in this particular video./nComments and criticisms are both welcome and encouraged. Point out things you really liked, and things that could be worked. Again, if you can avoid obvious problems (like the shoulders), that039;d be great.
